Hiki's artsies (or something like that)
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)
Looks good, though there is something... I don't know, proportions, maybe? Either her hands are too big or her waist is wasp-like.
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*looks up from desk*
...yes, the porportions suck.
*headdesk*
...yes, the porportions suck.
*headdesk*
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)
I would say the worst proportional problem there is the head is to large. The left hand may seem a bit large, but in perspective, it is closer to us. The head though, is as wide as the shoulders, that doesn't fit.
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That's the first thing I say when I show someone the picture... "head is big, so never mind that.." =_=
*more headdesking ensues*
*more headdesking ensues*
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It's the first picture I actually like in a loooooooooooong time. I know there are some things wrong and I already know what I have to change to make everything right, so please no crits.
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This is the last you'll see of this picture (or at least until E-chi has seen it, because I promised she'd see it first after it's finished).
She's getting a make-over (new hair colour and a slightly different eye colour) C:Don't feed me violins.
Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)
I really like that picture, Hiki Can't see anything I would call wrong.
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If you're talking about the lineart then there shoudln't be anything wrong (because E-chi checked everything for me), but if you're talking about the sketch... *shrug* then I'm glad you can't see what's wrong :3
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)
the one you labeled anza, you said there are things wrong, but I can't see them. I think you do very well.
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