Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

[Zeratul2k]

Looks good, though there is something... I don't know, proportions, maybe? Either her hands are too big or her waist is wasp-like.

[Hiki]

*looks up from desk*

...yes, the porportions suck.

*headdesk*

[oldwrench]

I would say the worst proportional problem there is the head is to large. The left hand may seem a bit large, but in perspective, it is closer to us. The head though, is as wide as the shoulders, that doesn't fit.

[Hiki]

That's the first thing I say when I show someone the picture... "head is big, so never mind that.." =_=

*more headdesking ensues*

[Hiki]

H. Vanilla (c) the respectful owners etc

Talk about major suck =_=

[Hiki]

It's the first picture I actually like in a loooooooooooong time. I know there are some things wrong and I already know what I have to change to make everything right, so please no crits.

Azna (c) me

(yes, she has a name now...)

[Hiki]

This is the last you'll see of this picture (or at least until E-chi has seen it, because I promised she'd see it first after it's finished).

Azna (c) me

She's getting a make-over (new hair colour and a slightly different eye colour) C:

[oldwrench]

I really like that picture, Hiki Can't see anything I would call wrong.

[Hiki]

If you're talking about the lineart then there shoudln't be anything wrong (because E-chi checked everything for me), but if you're talking about the sketch... *shrug* then I'm glad you can't see what's wrong :3

[oldwrench]

the one you labeled anza, you said there are things wrong, but I can't see them. I think you do very well.