Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by Zeratul2k » November 26th, 2009, 5:30 pm

Looks good, though there is something... I don't know, proportions, maybe? Either her hands are too big or her waist is wasp-like.
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by Hiki » November 26th, 2009, 7:20 pm

*looks up from desk*

...yes, the porportions suck.

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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by oldwrench » November 27th, 2009, 2:31 am

I would say the worst proportional problem there is the head is to large. The left hand may seem a bit large, but in perspective, it is closer to us. The head though, is as wide as the shoulders, that doesn't fit.
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by Hiki » November 27th, 2009, 6:59 pm

That's the first thing I say when I show someone the picture... "head is big, so never mind that.." =_=

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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by Hiki » November 28th, 2009, 12:20 pm

H. Vanilla (c) the respectful owners etc
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Talk about major suck =_=
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by Hiki » November 28th, 2009, 7:49 pm

It's the first picture I actually like in a loooooooooooong time. I know there are some things wrong and I already know what I have to change to make everything right, so please no crits.
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by Hiki » November 29th, 2009, 3:23 pm

This is the last you'll see of this picture (or at least until E-chi has seen it, because I promised she'd see it first after it's finished).
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by oldwrench » November 29th, 2009, 8:25 pm

I really like that picture, Hiki Can't see anything I would call wrong.
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by Hiki » November 30th, 2009, 2:36 pm

If you're talking about the lineart then there shoudln't be anything wrong (because E-chi checked everything for me), but if you're talking about the sketch... *shrug* then I'm glad you can't see what's wrong :3
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Re: Hiki's artsies (or something like that)

Post by oldwrench » November 30th, 2009, 4:25 pm

the one you labeled anza, you said there are things wrong, but I can't see them. I think you do very well.
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