Final Sentence: Dreaming Children

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Final Sentence: Dreaming Children

Post by Hiki » July 24th, 2009, 12:25 pm

OH NOES! ANOTHER ONE!!!
Yes, another one of my comics. Though the story will be both Esther's and mine, the art is mine (most of the story will be mine too, but when I'm stuck Esther has to help me since we created Final Sentence together. She has no choice in the matter XD).
Though this is just a spin-off from the original Final Sentence story (made by Esther and which is still very unfinished), you don't need to know anything about the original story. The information you need is provided throughout the story 8D

Here's the plot of Dreaming Children in a nutshell:
All dreams, and thus everyone, is in danger and so the dreams create Mara. Mara went to the Guardians (of the Gate)to ask them for their help. Since the Guardians are there to provide help to those who need it, no matter which realm/dimension they come from, they decide to help.

Et voilà.

Right now I only have the coloured version of the cover, but I want to finish the lineart of my three sketched pages today..

Anyway, I hope you like the story 8D

Oh, if you're wondering about Ranu no Tsubasa, it'll be updated as slowly as usually XD (especially since I can't acces my computer at the moment 'cause a bed's in the way XD)
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Re: Final Sentence: Dreaming Children

Post by JHawkNH » July 24th, 2009, 3:03 pm

I love it. A spin-off from a series that you haven't finished yet.
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Re: Final Sentence: Dreaming Children

Post by Hiki » July 24th, 2009, 4:13 pm

Oh, this is only one of the many spin-offs. We have at least five others lying around somewhere XD
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Re: Final Sentence: Dreaming Children

Post by oldwrench » July 24th, 2009, 10:56 pm

When you get spin offs of your spin offs, then you're getting into my dream patterns.
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Re: Final Sentence: Dreaming Children

Post by Hiki » August 19th, 2009, 9:49 pm

Erm... does getting back on one (like referring or characters) of your spin-offs in another spin-off count as a spin-off of a spin-off? XD Because I checked and I found that we have reffered to other spin-offs in our spin-offs.

(Waaaaaaaaay late reply, I know, but I kinda forgot I hadn't replied XD)


Alrighteh, new cover for Dreaming Children (because I wasn't happy with the first one XD)
Dreaming Children vol. 1 (colour).jpg
Now I can actually start working on it~!

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Re: Final Sentence: Dreaming Children

Post by Hiki » August 22nd, 2009, 8:13 pm

Right to left~!
Story: Esther and me
Art: me~!


I hope you like it~!
page 1.jpg

My normal pen (0.25 mm) died on me T-T
That's why the text is so... I don't know... thin-ish..? And wobbly XD I'm not used to write with my tiny-tiny (0.1 mm) pen XD
That's also why I won't be finishing any of the other pages I've made because then the text would be wobbly and thin again D: But mum and me are going to get a new pen on monday, so I can work on it again after my introduction week~! That is... if I'm not terribly dead by then XD
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Re: Final Sentence: Dreaming Children

Post by Sakura » August 23rd, 2009, 10:41 am

Meow, I have also added this story but it's not yet visible. One page only... :sob:

You can still check the page here: http://www.allanime.org/index.php?id=284
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Re: Final Sentence: Dreaming Children

Post by Hiki » August 24th, 2009, 10:59 am

That's okay :kiss:

Thank you very much~! :love: :love: :love:
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