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Say, this is a very good story, so devilishly evil feeling. Your descriptions and character build up is coming along nicely. I believe your style is called the third person style, or gods eye style. Viewed as if from above. Keep writing, I'm intrigued....

Oh, and the line, "She then started off on her merry way again" was so sadistically sick and wrong, I almost choked....... Oooo, I like it.

Hehehe thank you!! ^^

Wow...I don't venture much into this part of the forum but I figured I would and I saw this...it's wonderful. Dark and yet so enticing. Your writing styles makes the reader, me for one, want to read more of it. And the cliffhangers are just right, making me wonder what happens next.

What will happen next?

P.S.
Your drawing is absolute love! So pretty!

Curiosity killed the cat...well good thing I'm not a cat.
I am a cat.... *gulps*

Sakura wrote:Curiosity killed the cat...well good thing I'm not a cat.
I am a cat.... *gulps*

hahaha...it's alright Sakura we'll protect you from curiosity...if that's even possible...