Re: 5 minutes...... oldwrench tries story telling
Posted: July 1st, 2010, 4:11 am
What happened to chapter 43????
I thought I posted it.
must have forgotten to hit the submit button
good thing I saved it
well, now I have two chapters to post, hope you enjoy them, things will heat up again later.
Chapter 43
General Parker walked into his office and found Tom already there, sitting in a chair and
working on his laptop. “I’ll be leaving for Mar Sara in a few days,” the general told him.
Tom looked up, “I thought someone had convinced the admiralty that you shouldn’t be
allowed to go.”
“I went over their heads,” George smirked, “let’s see them try to stop me.”
Tom gasped, “you went to........”
“Yes I did,” George laughed. “They won’t be able to oppose a direct order from the
emperor himself.”
“You’re going to make some people very upset, sir” Tom said, shaking his head.
“That’s just fine. Maybe we’ll smoke out the rat that’s been causing the delays,” the
general said as he sat down. “We just can’t wait any longer. There’s still no word from the
Krikav, or the Ticonderoga. We can’t just sit on this, we have to act, and I have to be there so this
doesn’t turn into another massacre.”
“I just hope this doesn’t put a black mark on your career, sir.” Tom told him.
“The emperor wants this mess cleared up as much as I do, Tom. That’s why he agreed to
see me.” George sighed, “We’ve got to find out who’s behind these incidents, before it causes a
war....... How is the interrogation of Ashford coming?”
“We seem to have wrung all we’re going to get out of him.” Tom replied. “I still think he
knows more, but he’s either to afraid or to stubborn to say any more.”
“Alright, I want you to cut him loose.” The general said as he looked at his messages.
“Let him loose? But sir, he may know more.” Tome complained
“That’s alright,” the general said, without looking up, “keep a close watch on him. I’ll bet
he’ll contact whoever he works with within a few days........... Hmm, What’s this? I have a
message from Tod, an R&D tech from Victorville, he’s demanding that I recall the Krikav. Says
it’s of vital importance. Say’s we have to return his mech and the pilot.”
Tom stopped typing in mid stroke, “What? That’s the researcher who lost that mech with
the cloaking system.”
“How the heck does he know that his mech’s on the Krikav?” George asked, “I thought
you couldn’t find a trace of it.”
“We can’t.” Tom looked thoughtful for a moment. “The Krikav was at the moon base for
resupply at that time, and we haven’t been able to confirm that they don’t have it. Maybe that’s
what makes him think they do.” Tom worked at his keyboard for a few moments. “Records show
there was a new firefly assigned to a pilot aboard the Krikav. You don’t suppose.......”
“As soon as you wrap up this Ashford business, get out to Victorville and find out what
you can from this tech. Maybe he found something that we don’t know about.” The general
looked back down at his computer, dismissing Tom.
Chapter 44
The colonel looked around the room at the pilots of his command. “Each of you is going
to have to help the techs re-arm and repair your mechs. The master tech informed me that we are
short of techs. We should have two techs for each of your mechs, but we were only assigned one
for each. Since the losses of the pirate wars, the EDF has been as short of techs as they are of
pilots. I know some of you may not be technically inclined, but any pair of hands will be a help.”
Dan sighed, he knew the one pilot that should be helping the techs wouldn’t be able to.
“Lieutenant Ross, since you’re the only one who can see through their cloaks, I want you outside,
keeping watch. I know it’s going to be tough, but you will have to stay alert round the clock.”
“Sir,” Chad spoke up, “the ships sensors should be able to detect the cloaked mechs, if
they had the right software. I asked Ghost and she said the software we were using should be able
to be converted for the ship to use.”
“Ghost?” The colonel asked. “Who’s that?”
“Oh... that’s the name I gave my mech, sir.” Chad replied.
“Ghost....... Hmm, a fitting name, but, you asked a mech? That doesn’t make sense
lieutenant, mechs can’t answer you.”
“But Ghost can, sir. She’s an AI, I couldn’t have learned to use the mechs systems so
soon without her help.” Chad explained. “She’s something special, sir.”
The colonel touched his communicator, “Yuki, report to the cafeteria. ...........We’ll see
what the controller thinks of your suggestion. If she can use it, it would be a great asset.”
There was some murmuring among the pilots about the revelation of an AI in Chad’s
mech, but it all stopped when the ship’s controller entered. “Pilot Yuki, reporting as ordered sir,”
the young girl announced.
“Ah, Yuki, lieutenant Ross’ mech told him you could use the sensor program she has to
detect the enemy mechs using the ship sensors. Do you think that would be possible?” The
colonel asked.
“That would not be possible, sir” she replied.
The colonel frowned, darn, just when he’d had his hopes up.
“Mobile suits are not able to converse with their pilots,” she continued.
“But Ghost can,” Chad burst out, “she’s special.”
Dan looked at Chad, then back to Yuki, “I’d like you to check that out, Yuki. If you can
use that program, it would be a big advantage.”
“I will attempt to establish a link with the computer of Blue Dragon four, sir,” Yuki
replied. She stood unmoving for several seconds. “Lieutenant Ross is correct, Blue Dragon four
is able to communicate with it’s pilot.”
“What about the sensor system? Can you use the software?” Dan asked.
“Ghost and I have just had a thorough discussion concerning cloaking and quantum
physics. I have downloaded a copy of the sensor programing.” Yuki told them in her emotionless
voice.
“Can you use it?” The colonel asked.
“The program will have to be rewritten to match ship system protocols.” Yuki stated, then
stood still again for several seconds. “It is installed and operating, sir. According to system tests,
the sensors should now be effective against the enemy’s cloaking system. The ship sensors
should give us slightly better range than those of Ghost.”
“Already?” Dan was surprised for a moment. “Yes, I imagine it wouldn’t take you long.
You can return to the bridge, Yuki.” Dan looked around at the pilots, this was good, Chad would
be valuable helping repair the mechs, with his tech background. “Alright, I’ll expect all pilots to
be in the hangar and working with the techs in thirty minutes. Let’s get those machines ready for
combat. I have a feeling this isn’t over yet.”
I thought I posted it.
must have forgotten to hit the submit button
good thing I saved it
well, now I have two chapters to post, hope you enjoy them, things will heat up again later.
Chapter 43
General Parker walked into his office and found Tom already there, sitting in a chair and
working on his laptop. “I’ll be leaving for Mar Sara in a few days,” the general told him.
Tom looked up, “I thought someone had convinced the admiralty that you shouldn’t be
allowed to go.”
“I went over their heads,” George smirked, “let’s see them try to stop me.”
Tom gasped, “you went to........”
“Yes I did,” George laughed. “They won’t be able to oppose a direct order from the
emperor himself.”
“You’re going to make some people very upset, sir” Tom said, shaking his head.
“That’s just fine. Maybe we’ll smoke out the rat that’s been causing the delays,” the
general said as he sat down. “We just can’t wait any longer. There’s still no word from the
Krikav, or the Ticonderoga. We can’t just sit on this, we have to act, and I have to be there so this
doesn’t turn into another massacre.”
“I just hope this doesn’t put a black mark on your career, sir.” Tom told him.
“The emperor wants this mess cleared up as much as I do, Tom. That’s why he agreed to
see me.” George sighed, “We’ve got to find out who’s behind these incidents, before it causes a
war....... How is the interrogation of Ashford coming?”
“We seem to have wrung all we’re going to get out of him.” Tom replied. “I still think he
knows more, but he’s either to afraid or to stubborn to say any more.”
“Alright, I want you to cut him loose.” The general said as he looked at his messages.
“Let him loose? But sir, he may know more.” Tome complained
“That’s alright,” the general said, without looking up, “keep a close watch on him. I’ll bet
he’ll contact whoever he works with within a few days........... Hmm, What’s this? I have a
message from Tod, an R&D tech from Victorville, he’s demanding that I recall the Krikav. Says
it’s of vital importance. Say’s we have to return his mech and the pilot.”
Tom stopped typing in mid stroke, “What? That’s the researcher who lost that mech with
the cloaking system.”
“How the heck does he know that his mech’s on the Krikav?” George asked, “I thought
you couldn’t find a trace of it.”
“We can’t.” Tom looked thoughtful for a moment. “The Krikav was at the moon base for
resupply at that time, and we haven’t been able to confirm that they don’t have it. Maybe that’s
what makes him think they do.” Tom worked at his keyboard for a few moments. “Records show
there was a new firefly assigned to a pilot aboard the Krikav. You don’t suppose.......”
“As soon as you wrap up this Ashford business, get out to Victorville and find out what
you can from this tech. Maybe he found something that we don’t know about.” The general
looked back down at his computer, dismissing Tom.
Chapter 44
The colonel looked around the room at the pilots of his command. “Each of you is going
to have to help the techs re-arm and repair your mechs. The master tech informed me that we are
short of techs. We should have two techs for each of your mechs, but we were only assigned one
for each. Since the losses of the pirate wars, the EDF has been as short of techs as they are of
pilots. I know some of you may not be technically inclined, but any pair of hands will be a help.”
Dan sighed, he knew the one pilot that should be helping the techs wouldn’t be able to.
“Lieutenant Ross, since you’re the only one who can see through their cloaks, I want you outside,
keeping watch. I know it’s going to be tough, but you will have to stay alert round the clock.”
“Sir,” Chad spoke up, “the ships sensors should be able to detect the cloaked mechs, if
they had the right software. I asked Ghost and she said the software we were using should be able
to be converted for the ship to use.”
“Ghost?” The colonel asked. “Who’s that?”
“Oh... that’s the name I gave my mech, sir.” Chad replied.
“Ghost....... Hmm, a fitting name, but, you asked a mech? That doesn’t make sense
lieutenant, mechs can’t answer you.”
“But Ghost can, sir. She’s an AI, I couldn’t have learned to use the mechs systems so
soon without her help.” Chad explained. “She’s something special, sir.”
The colonel touched his communicator, “Yuki, report to the cafeteria. ...........We’ll see
what the controller thinks of your suggestion. If she can use it, it would be a great asset.”
There was some murmuring among the pilots about the revelation of an AI in Chad’s
mech, but it all stopped when the ship’s controller entered. “Pilot Yuki, reporting as ordered sir,”
the young girl announced.
“Ah, Yuki, lieutenant Ross’ mech told him you could use the sensor program she has to
detect the enemy mechs using the ship sensors. Do you think that would be possible?” The
colonel asked.
“That would not be possible, sir” she replied.
The colonel frowned, darn, just when he’d had his hopes up.
“Mobile suits are not able to converse with their pilots,” she continued.
“But Ghost can,” Chad burst out, “she’s special.”
Dan looked at Chad, then back to Yuki, “I’d like you to check that out, Yuki. If you can
use that program, it would be a big advantage.”
“I will attempt to establish a link with the computer of Blue Dragon four, sir,” Yuki
replied. She stood unmoving for several seconds. “Lieutenant Ross is correct, Blue Dragon four
is able to communicate with it’s pilot.”
“What about the sensor system? Can you use the software?” Dan asked.
“Ghost and I have just had a thorough discussion concerning cloaking and quantum
physics. I have downloaded a copy of the sensor programing.” Yuki told them in her emotionless
voice.
“Can you use it?” The colonel asked.
“The program will have to be rewritten to match ship system protocols.” Yuki stated, then
stood still again for several seconds. “It is installed and operating, sir. According to system tests,
the sensors should now be effective against the enemy’s cloaking system. The ship sensors
should give us slightly better range than those of Ghost.”
“Already?” Dan was surprised for a moment. “Yes, I imagine it wouldn’t take you long.
You can return to the bridge, Yuki.” Dan looked around at the pilots, this was good, Chad would
be valuable helping repair the mechs, with his tech background. “Alright, I’ll expect all pilots to
be in the hangar and working with the techs in thirty minutes. Let’s get those machines ready for
combat. I have a feeling this isn’t over yet.”