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Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 28th, 2009, 12:04 am
by Hiki
I made a page of a manga/comic.. And I decided to share it with you.. It's not that good, though :shy:

And like all manga, you read it from right to left! :love:
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It's about... well, you'll see in the next pages, really... And only the first pages are coloured (WAAAAAAAAAAAY TOO MUCH WORK)

If there are any mistakes, I appologise... it's late and I'm tired D:

Re: Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 28th, 2009, 5:05 am
by oldwrench
Oooooo...... next page please!! Looks nice to me Hiki.

Re: Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 28th, 2009, 10:27 am
by Hiki
Thank you :shy: It'll be a while before I make the next page though because I have no time today and it took me a whole day (from 10.00 to 00.00) to finish the first page :shy: :swt: . (But that wasn't my fault... entirely.) So, even though I can draw the page today (probably) it will take a while to make the lineart and colour it and such.. Though I hope I can finish it this weekend (wouldn't count on it, though, since I work reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally slow lately :swt: ).

Re: Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 28th, 2009, 2:46 pm
by JHawkNH
It looks great so far. I understand how long it takes to do artwork. When I use to do a web strip on AAW it was all done with stick figures and that would take me multiple hours to complete. I can only imagine something of your quality must take many more hours.

Re: Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 28th, 2009, 4:10 pm
by Zeratul2k
Wow, looking good! Keep up the good work. You shouldn't worry about the pages not being colored, IMO. I mean, most manga is shades of gray only, right?

Re: Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 28th, 2009, 4:17 pm
by Dinky
LOVE it! The art is awesome, keep it up! And don't color if it's too much work, black/white/grey is fine, too!

Re: Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 28th, 2009, 6:50 pm
by Hiki
Thank you everyone!!! :love: :kiss: I will do my best :ho: (but first I have to finish the character design of Licorice before I can start working on the second page... And I have to try my new pens :D). Please wait a little longer :shy:

Re: Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 29th, 2009, 5:27 am
by Sakura
I like the horns. :gg:

Re: Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 29th, 2009, 5:57 am
by Elvin
I envy those that can draw :sob:

Re: Ranu no Tsubasa

Posted: May 29th, 2009, 11:07 pm
by Hiki
My friend helped me with the char. design of Queen Reela, I'll tell her you like the horns, Sakura 8D

But, Elvin, there are things that you can do and we can't, so you shouldn't really envy those who can draw, right? :hmm:

AND HERE IT IS!! THE SECOND PAGE!!! ENTER SAINT LICORICE-SAMA :love:
(Still from right to left, please. Thank you!) Hope you enjoy (n_n)
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